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    Uhh, do you need to see someone [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/rock.gif[/img] [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif[/img] LOL. No, it was good for such short notice. [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif[/img] [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/laugh.gif[/img]
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    uhm , [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/rock.gif[/img] ok ....................... [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/laugh.gif[/img]

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    I liked it: the allegorical journey where the author transposes the lack of biological merit onto the gamut of adult experience: the "Mud" of mundane existence filling the awaiting "pichers" designed to entrap more sustaining prey (which now has no place to fill) while the passing "piranna's": (self serving protagonists) refuse to understand anything outside of their own perogatives. Like the Heli subject, our fleeting 20's are spent "between the sand" after "slipping on the toad" in consequence of confrontation with the ugly side of our own human nature cojoined with the subject "Heli's" frail and endangered existence in an oft times harsh environment ("rotten and insane"), and lack of proper life assurances. It is a tale of pathos, redeemed only by the final uncertain exorcism of the synonomnity that unites the author, perhaps irrevokably with "the Clump": "Is this Clump outta my head?
    I think so.... "

    I await the next poem with keen interest!
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    LOL Tamlin, you make everything sound better! You should have people pay you to write recommendation letters [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif[/img]

    Perhaps you've had more fumes than I have today? [img]http://www.**********.com/iB_html312/non-cgi/emoticons/rock.gif[/img]
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    I learned how to do this in an upper level English course in college. I swear I could write a three page analysis of "Three Blind Mice" and relate it to the current geopolitical climate, the AMA, and several world religions. The truth is, I really did like the poem. Please continue!
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