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Oda a la Venus Atrapamoscas
¡Mosca, escondete!
Ronda la Atrapamoscas,
Dientes grandes,
Boca enorme,
Trampa dañina
Solo quiere tu sangre,
De ella obtiene su fuerza,
No se la das.
Es una lastima:
Tú eres tu propia enemiga.
La atrapamoscas no puede atrampar,
Si no vas a tomar su néctar;
Pero no la puedes resistir.
______________________________
Atrapamoscas, te amo a ti;
Contigo, no habra moscas en mi casa.
Gracias Cain por su ayuda.
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Reads like it was translated and not written in Spanish.
"There is no pain as great as being alive,
no burden heavier than that of conscious life. "
-Rubén Darío-
I'll ask my dad to read it to me tomorrow.
If he gets confused it means it was translated to some extent XD
Pretty good... but it would be EL atrapamoscas... and "atrampar" should be "atrapar" in the infinitive.
Y no se olvide de los tildes ;-) Son importantísimos
Cole
Duele no tenerte cerca, duele no escuchar tu voz. Duele respirar tu ausencia, pero, duele más decirte adiós.
Oh please, oh please, oh, PLEASE translate it for me?
Mi Espanol es MUY mala!
Nice poem, translated or not it is still readable.
Yo uso el idioma todos los dias, pero se me olvido como deletrear palabras en espanol!
Wow, what a cool poem!! Hmm, let's see...
Oda a la Venus Atrapamoscas
Ode to the Venus Flytrap
¡Mosca, escondete!
Fly, hide!
Ronda la Atrapamoscas,
The Flytrap is round
Dientes grandes,
With large teeth
Boca enorme,
Enormous mouth
Trampa dañina
Damaging trap
Solo quiere tu sangre,
It only wants your blood
De ella obtiene su fuerza,
From [the fly] it obtains its force
No se la das.
Don't give in to it
Es una lastima:
It's a shame
Tú eres tu propia enemiga.
You are your own enemy
La atrapamoscas no puede atrampar,
The flytrap can't trap
Si no vas a tomar su néctar;
If you don't go to drink its nectar
Pero no la puedes resistir.
But you can't resist it
______________________________
Atrapamoscas, te amo a ti;
Flytrap, I love you
Contigo, no habra moscas en mi casa.
With you, there won't be flies in my house.
-Emily
Oooh! Thank you!
I work in an environment heavily saturated with Spanish, and though I am picking it up rapidly, it's only what I hear. If you were telling me that the machine is broken, and is making bad parts, I'd understand you.
SDCPS, the poem is VERY nice, and flows prettily in Spanish.
~Edit~
May I use this portion in my signature?
Atrapamoscas, te amo a ti;
Flytrap, I love you
Contigo, no habra moscas en mi casa.
With you, there won't be flies in my house.
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