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guys, try to have the story flow smoothly and make sence.
Mankind. "Argh!" cried mankind deserved it.
That doesn't make sence. how about:
mankind. "Aaargh!" cried the man, for (and the next three words,) he had a (instead of something TOTALLY off topic, like, "elephant deserved it" now that wouldnt flow smoothly would it?)
OMG!! This reminds me of the Run With the Wind board days... we used to have this exact thing there!! I laughed my guts out.. It went on to earn a degree in 100 pages.
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